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Holy shit I just realize it's only chapter 2 and He's talking to Lou. When I originally planned this out, It was chapter 4. I wanted Gage to seem more like a person with real world problems before he became what he is now, then still having to deal with those problems in his current life.
Should re-write be done? Those of you who do take the time to read this, should I re-write chapter one and two? I want this story to be it's best.
Should re-write be done? Those of you who do take the time to read this, should I re-write chapter one and two? I want this story to be it's best.
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